I think your crime scene photo is definitely the most successful. It's the most visually interesting, has a good composition, and is strong conceptually.
I really like the Smirnoff bottles and the reflections off of the bottles. Also, I like the second one of you in a pirate costume. Your expression is funny and adds to the pirate idea.
The passport ones are cool, I really want to see the other pictures you took. The Parrot Bay with the pick your poison sign is a nice idea, but I think it would look better if the white surface in front cropped out more. Maybe a straight on shot with the camera on the surface would work well.
i think the first one could work to sell the product. it might even be better from a straight-on angle. i like the picture of the guy looking up because it comments on photography in posed situation/drivers license/passport.
I really like the contrast in the first image. However, you might want to consider cropping it a little, so that the bottles aren't completely in the image. I also really like the second to the last image as a yearbook picture. She looks uncomfortable and awkward and that really reflects how a lot of people feel when taking senior portraits.
I like the first image. Maybe focus on the lighting off the bottles. I also like the one of the guy in the bathtub. It really tells a story. Maybe his wife killed him because he was a cheater.
I think your crime scene photo is definitely the most successful. It's the most visually interesting, has a good composition, and is strong conceptually.
ReplyDeleteThe first two photos don't really say much about advertising to me.
ReplyDeleteI really like the Smirnoff bottles and the reflections off of the bottles. Also, I like the second one of you in a pirate costume. Your expression is funny and adds to the pirate idea.
ReplyDeleteThe parot bay one with the shadow is great but the light switch in the background is distracting. I also like the smirnoff one.
ReplyDeleteI like the first one best as an advertisement. I bet it does look really good in color too- that would probably make a good ad.
ReplyDeleteThe passport ones are cool, I really want to see the other pictures you took. The Parrot Bay with the pick your poison sign is a nice idea, but I think it would look better if the white surface in front cropped out more. Maybe a straight on shot with the camera on the surface would work well.
ReplyDeletei think the first one could work to sell the product. it might even be better from a straight-on angle. i like the picture of the guy looking up because it comments on photography in posed situation/drivers license/passport.
ReplyDeleteI really like the contrast in the first image. However, you might want to consider cropping it a little, so that the bottles aren't completely in the image.
ReplyDeleteI also really like the second to the last image as a yearbook picture. She looks uncomfortable and awkward and that really reflects how a lot of people feel when taking senior portraits.
I like the first image. Maybe focus on the lighting off the bottles. I also like the one of the guy in the bathtub. It really tells a story. Maybe his wife killed him because he was a cheater.
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